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检查语法错误First,在学校学习没有在家里学习效率高,并且处理好同学之间的关系是困难的.but it can deve

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检查语法错误
First,在学校学习没有在家里学习效率高,并且处理好同学之间的关系是困难的.but it can develop your life skils .便于以后更好的融入社会.second ,I think school's food isn't health campared to ours home .I think my parent cook food better than school's food .
Third ,i think i can save too much time to go to school than at home .and I will be safe .above all ,我能更容易的去向老师寻求帮助.
中文有的不会,给变成英文=3=
第二点中有点混乱,同时“比较”的单词有误,“父母”应用复数(与Cook对应)second,I think school's food isn't healthy compared to that at home.I think the food my parents cook is better than that in school.
第三点“too……to”不如改为“save a lot of time to……”(“too……to是以至不能的意思”)
ps:I think 用的太多,可以用一下同义词组,如“in my opinion”等,还有…….
短文:first,it is more effective studying at home than in the school,moreover,dealing with relationship with classmates successfully can be somewhat hard ,but it can develop your life skils promoting a better integration into society. Second,I think school's food isn't healthy compared to that at home and the food my parents cook is more delicious.
Third ,as far as i am concerned,a lot of time will be saved when choose to be at home instead of going to the school as well as the scurity guarantees.你的意思有点混乱,不是很明白,就这样吧.