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求英语牛人帮我找出一个简单的句子的语病

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求英语牛人帮我找出一个简单的句子的语病
求找语病
顺便帮我翻译下 改点什么词或者加点更有情调的话就更好啦!
这个句子
I Love you not for who you are,but for Who I am before you.And I am still myself beyond responsibility.still!
I love you not because who you are,but becuase who I am in the face of you.
And I am still myself with my promise and responsibility in my heart!
我爱你,不是因为你是谁,而是因为在你面前我是谁.
我,还是那个承诺和责任都在心中的的我.
or
I love you not because who you are,but becuase who I am in the eyes of you.
我爱你,不是因为你是谁,而是因为在你眼里我是谁.
Just as a saying goes——Beauty is in the eyes of beholder
正如俗语所说“情人眼里出西施”.