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英语句子纠错(四个句子80分!)

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英语句子纠错(四个句子80分!)
1:March.5th,not only the day in honor of Lei Feng but also appeals everyone to offer your hands to those in need.(3月5日,不仅是纪念雷锋,更呼吁每个人向需要帮助的人伸出援手)
2:Jim was asked for more than 1000 yuan for compensation.(Jim被索要1000元作为赔偿)
3:Some people believe that society without helping others will made people live in the darkness.(有些人认为如果社会没有乐于助人,人们将会生活在黑暗中)
4:Some people argue that those who help others will get themselves into trouble easily.(有些人认为乐于帮助他人的人很容易给自自己惹麻烦)
Jim,youngster in Beijng who helped a fall old woman on the ground in the bus station.(Jim,一位北京的年轻人曾在汽车站帮助了一位摔倒在地的老人)
改为:(第4句本身没有错误,我只是在选词上面进行了润色)
1.March.5th is not only the day in honor of Lei Feng but also the day that appeals everyone to offer their hands to those in need.
2.Jim was charged more than 1000 yuan for compensation.
3.Some people believe that a society without lending a helping hand will make people live in the darkness.
4.Some people argue that those who are ready to render help to others tend to get themselves into trouble easily.
再问: Jim,youngster in Beijng who helped a fall old woman on the ground in the bus station.(Jim,一位北京的年轻人曾在汽车站帮助了一位摔倒在地的老人)
再答: Jim, a youngster in Beijing who helped a fallen old woman on the ground in a bus,(特指那辆公共汽车才用the)........... 这只是完成了主语+同位语(定语从句),句子并没有完成。 如果要变成完整的句子,是这样的: Jim, who is a youngster in Beijing, helped a fallen old woman on the ground in a bus.