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定格在心中的画面 作文
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定格在心中的瞬间
童年时代,陪伴父亲一起遨游在书的海洋之中的星星点点,已在我的一声呵斥下不复存在,只见到父亲白发时,才想起这些,想起父亲脸上绽放的光泽,想起这广大的人间,他是我的唯一的父亲.
记得小时候,父亲总是和我一起看书,那时候,我和父亲的知识总是互相交换.但随着年龄的增长,我开始疏远我的父亲.直到有一天,父亲拿着一本书来与我商讨,可此时我由于考试成绩不理想,心里十分沮丧.看到父亲兴冲冲的走来,我心中的不满一下子发泄了出来,对他吼道:“你烦不烦啊!”话应刚落他就低头走了.而他那无助的表情,深深地攫住了我,我的心中都点后悔.从此,我再也没有向父亲请教过,而是把我的问题公布到网上,但每次回复我的问题都是同一个人,奇怪?这个人是谁呢?他和我很熟吗?这些问题一直困惑着我.
有一天,因为老师开会,我也就早早的回家了,突然,我听到了键盘的声音,是谁在用电脑?是父亲?他连怎么开机都不会啊!于是,我蹑手蹑脚的走人房间,望去——父亲在使用电脑!再仔细一看,发现父亲在回答我的问题.我突然恍然大悟,原来,这些日子,一直是父亲在默默的帮助我.在父亲的身后,一本《电脑用法速成》深深地触动了我,我开始后悔,后悔当初那对父亲的一声怒吼,是他破坏了我和父亲的感情···不知什么时候,我的眼圈变红了,两眼蒙蒙,热泪盈眶,鼻塞声嘶.这是,父亲似乎注意到了我,转过头来,尴尬的对我说:“你···什么时···候···候来的?”“爸,您辛苦了!”我一把扑入父亲的怀中······
这些微不足道的感情才是最容易被人们所接受、所珍惜的.的确,父亲为我的瞬间永远定格在我的心中.
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Fixed in the heart of the moment
Childhood,with his father in the sea in the book of the tiny spots,in my voice shouted ceased to exist,only to see his father of white hair,just remember these,remembered his father's face shine luster,think of this vast world,he is only my father.
I remember when I was young,my father always read a book,and I together at that time,my father and knowledge is exchanged.But with age,I began to alienate my father.Until one day,the father took a book with me to discuss,at this point I didn't do well on the exam,my heart very depressed.See father came along,I grievances out on all of a sudden,he shouted:"you don't bother!" You should just fell he would go down.And he that helpless expression,deeply has seized me,my heart is little regret.From then on,I never ask his father,but to my questions posted to the web,are the same person,strange but each time to answer my question?Who is this man?He was familiar with me?These problems have been puzzling me.
One day,because the teacher meeting,I also got home,suddenly,I heard the keyboard sound,who is in the computer?Is the father?That won't happen,will it.He even how to boot is not ah!So,I make one's way noiselessly to leave the room,looked -- father in the use of computer!Look again carefully,found his father in answer to my question.Suddenly I see light suddenly,the original,these days,has been quietly to help my father in.In his father's behind a computer usage,"crash" touched me deeply,I began to regret,regret that his father with a roar,he destroyed my father and I love?I do not know when,my eyes turned red,his eyes misty,tears,nasal hoarseness.That is,the father seemed to notice me,turned his head,embarrassing said to me:"you?What symptom?waiting for?" "Dad,you have worked hard!" I'm a jumped into the bosom of the father?
These feelings of not worth mentioning is the most easily accepted by the people,cherish.Indeed,my forever in my heart.
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