帮我改一个morning report急用.就剩这点分了,全给了!

帮我改一个morning report急用.就剩这点分了,全给了!
morning everybody
Today,it should be my turn to do morning report
and
I will say some lines,I would like to let you-all guess where this is a lines in the movie,all right?
readly?
number one:
once i let a ture love slip away before my eyes,only to find myself regretting when it was too late,nothing in the world can be as painful as this,if the god wound give a chance ,i wound tell the girl i love the girl ,if our love have to be setted a time limit ,i wish it wound be ten thounds of years
Somebody guess it?
thacher?
All right,then it's a difficult OK?
Ok number two:
male:Listen,Rose.You're going to get out of here.You're going to go on.You're going to make lots of babies,and you're going to watch them grow.You' re going to die and old,an old lady in her warm bed,not here,not this night,not like this.Do you understand me?
women:I can't feel my body.
male:Winning that ticket (for Titanic at a poker game) Rose,was the best thing that ever happened to me.It brought me to you,and I'm thankful (crying) you must (shivering) ...you must ...do me this honor.Promise me that you'll survive,that you won't give up,no matter what happens,no matter how hopeless.Promise me,now,Rose,and never let go of that promise,never let go.
women:I'll never let go,Jack.I'll never let go,I promise.
that's all
now,what about ok.Take your time
thank you ...
有N多的语法错误吧.嘻`~马上就到我了,救命啊.
....上面的是我自己写的哎.我要的要你帮我把这里面的一些语法错误改过来,而不是翻译!哎....无语了...嘻嘻~再看看好不?...

good morning everybody
Today,it is my turn to do morning report
and
I will say someting about lines,I would like all of you to know where this line is in the movie,all right?
readly?
number one:
once i let a ture love slip away before my eyes,i didn't find it until it was too late.nothing in the world can be as painful as this,if the god wound give me a second chance ,i wound tell the girl i love her,if my promise have to be setted a limited time,i wish it wound be ten thounds years
Somebody guesses it?
thacher?
All right,then it's too difficult
Ok number two:
male:Listen,Rose.You're going to get out of here.You're going to go on.You're going to born lots of babies,and you're going to watch them growing.You' re going to die and old,an old lady in her warm bed,not here,not this night,not like this.Do you understand me?
women:I can't feel my body.
male:Winning that ticket (for Titanic at a poker game) Rose,it was the best thing that ever happened to me.It brought me to you,and I'm thankful (crying) you must (shivering) ...you must ...give me this honor.Promise me that you'll survive,that you won't give up,no matter what happens,no matter how hopeless.Promise me,now,Rose,and never give up that promise,never give it up.
women:I'll never give up,Jack.I'll never give up,I promise.
that's all
now,what about this one ok.Take your time
thank you ...
老实说确实改了不少地方,
轻松点,别紧张,May you successed!