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英语短文改错jim is one of my closely friends,Tow months ago,his mo

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英语短文改错
jim is one of my closely friends,Tow months ago,his mother bought a computer to him as a birthday present.she hoped jim will study hard with the help of compter,jim just wasted plenty of time play computer games every day,now she regrets buying the computer ,As matter of fact ,a computer can do a lot of everyday jobs for us ,It is wide used in factories,hospitals,banks and so on,Many computers scientisti are now trying to make the competer to"think" like a man,In my opinion,the kry is what we should use it wisely
jim is one of my close (closely→close,副词改成形容词,只有形容词才能修饰名词) friends,Tow months ago,his mother bought a computer for (to→for,搭配问题) him as a birthday present.she hoped jim would (will→would,时态) study hard with the help of compter,but (加一个but作为连接词 ) jim just wasted plenty of time on playing (play→on playing,搭配问题) computer games everyday (every day→everyday).now she regrets buying the computer.As matter of fact ,a computer can do a lot of everyday jobs for us,It is widely (wide→widely) used in factories,hospitals,banks and so on,Many computers scientisti are now trying to make the competer to"think" like a man,In my opinion,the key is that (what→that) we should use it wisely