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你所在的学校将举办一场义卖，为四川灾区筹款。你作为学生会的外联部干事将负责邀请你校的外籍老师JOHN参加这项活动。请根据中文提纲，写一封邀请的电子邮件。活动目的；筹款帮助灾区人民度过寒冬；时间；下周六上午8：30---12：00 地点；学校中心广场 内容；学校和教师捐出家中闲置用品，现场义卖 意义；以爱心和行动支持灾区人民重建家园， 参加人员；全体教师和学生，并邀请家长参加，请在此基础上修改 DEAR JOHN； I am glad to writing for you .we will have an activity on the next Saturday morning 8：30---12：00 .The activity is to raise money to help the people in Sichuan through the winter .It is a charity sale . The location of it is our shool"s center. Students and teachers will sell their homes" things, and help the people in Sichuan . It is make sense to tell them we are together. We can help them to build their home again. And our school's students and their parents ,our teachers will join in this activity. in a word ,we are resposibile for it. We want you will invent our activity. yous li hua 请不改变主体，修改个别的
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Dear John ,
I am glad to writing to you .We will have an activity （on the 去掉）at 8：30---12：00 next Saturday morning .The activity is to raise money to help the people in Sichuan spend the winter .It is a charity sale . The location is the shool center square.
Students and teachers will sell their old things, and help the people in Sichuan . We will take action to tell them we are together. We can help them to build their home again. And our school's students and their parents ,our teachers will join
in this activity.
In a word ,we are resposibile for it. We want you to join our activity.
Yours,
Li Hua
最终答案：略
解题过程：
Dear John ,
I am glad to writing to you .We will have an activity （on the 去掉）at 8：30---12：00 next Saturday morning .The activity is to raise money to help the people in Sichuan spend the winter .It is a charity sale . The location is the shool center square.
Students and teachers will sell their old things, and help the people in Sichuan . We will take action to tell them we are together. We can help them to build their home again. And our school's students and their parents ,our teachers will join
in this activity.
In a word ,we are resposibile for it. We want you to join our activity.
Yours,
Li Hua
最终答案：略