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英语短文改错Yesterday li Ming and I took a part in an outdoor camp

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英语短文改错
Yesterday li Ming and I took a part in an outdoor camping activity,We got up as earlier as possible but put on strong and comfortable shoes.Then they headed for a hill with some food in the bags.When reaching the top,we saw a direction mark,that told us the position of the campsite.Down the hill.we come to a river but didnt know how to cross it.Suddenly I came up an idea.We ut our bags on a board and swam in the water push the board.After getting to the other ba"ks,we alkerl for half an hour unless we arrived at the destination.We spent the night there
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