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英语短文改错The first advantage of air travel is that it’s quick.Y

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英语短文改错
The first advantage of air travel is that it’s quick.You can fly since Europe to Asia in a few hours,and now with even faster planes,it’s getting more quicker.It’s very easy traveling by plane; your luggage is looked after and all what you have to do is enjoying a meal.Your comfortable seat is reserved so there is good service from the staff.Other point favor is that it is quite cheap for long-distance flights.On the other hand,flying has some disadvantages.Perhaps first is that you fly directly to your destination and you have feeling another.Another point is that because air travel is so quicker,people suffer from the tiredness; they save time traveling,but waste it recovering.One other problem is that fog can delay you and then the advantage of speed is losing.
1.You can fly since Europe to Asia in a few hours since改成from
2.it’s getting more quicker 直接是getting quicker,quicker已经是比较级了
3.It’s very easy traveling by plane 改成It's very easy to travel by plane.
4.so there is good service from the staff 改成and you'll get good service from the staff.
5.it is quite cheap for long-distance flights 改成long-distance flights are very cheap.
6.On the other hand改成however会好点,表转折
7.Perhaps first is that you fly directly to your destination and you have feeling another.前半句看的懂,是直接飞向目的地,但是 you have feeling another不知道您想表达什么意思
8.Another point is that because air travel is so quicker应该是so quick,so后面加形容词的,这里不用比较级
9.people suffer from the tiredness加个will或者may,people will/may.
10.is lost
以上是个人观点.具体的还是相信你自己吧.