作业帮看下下面两个英语句子写的对不对 有没有语法的毛病 错了帮忙改正
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看下下面两个英语句子写的对不对 有没有语法的毛病 错了帮忙改正
在高考第一的时代,我们应该去学学术方面的课程,而不是浪费时间去学体育.In this period which high exam is so important,we must pay more time to study academic course,instead of watse time to study music and sports.
在竞争激烈的社会,我们需要将专业知识学得更好,所以我赞成这个反对音乐课程的观点、.with this competitive sociology,we should study more and more professional knowledge.therefore,I agree with this viewpoint which opposes music course.
在高考第一的时代,我们应该去学学术方面的课程,而不是浪费时间去学体育.In this period which high exam is so important,we must pay more time to study academic course,instead of watse time to study music and sports.
在竞争激烈的社会,我们需要将专业知识学得更好,所以我赞成这个反对音乐课程的观点、.with this competitive sociology,we should study more and more professional knowledge.therefore,I agree with this viewpoint which opposes music course.
第一段的错误是：instead of wasting time to learn music and sports.
第二段：we should study more professional knowledge than others. I agree with this viewpoint of canceling music course.
总的来说很chinglish
而且这个观点好无语啊.好功利啊
再问： 哎 没办法是反方嘛 那怎么写才好
再答： instead of wasting time learning music and sports 写专业技能科学知识神马的是生产力，能提高人们的物质生活水平，而音乐体育什么的更多能满足人们的精神需要，而不能带来生活条件的改善
第二段：we should study more professional knowledge than others. I agree with this viewpoint of canceling music course.
总的来说很chinglish
而且这个观点好无语啊.好功利啊
再问： 哎 没办法是反方嘛 那怎么写才好
再答： instead of wasting time learning music and sports 写专业技能科学知识神马的是生产力，能提高人们的物质生活水平，而音乐体育什么的更多能满足人们的精神需要，而不能带来生活条件的改善