作业帮这是我的英文简历,谁能帮帮找找语法错误~
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这是我的英文简历,谁能帮帮找找语法错误~
Curriculum Vitae
INDIVIDUALINFO
Chinese name:Cheng Liu
English name:Alex
Gender:Male
Tel:(+86)134-2442-0054 (+86)159-9961-4696
EDUCATIONBACKGROUND ChangChun University
Bachelor of Industrial and Commercial Management Earned in 2008/7
EMPLOYMENTHIGHLIGHTS:
Business Assistant:
Job Responsibility:
1.Take charge of calling and receipting the old customer to process their treatment on time as well as introducing the product information for them.
2.Customer data management.
3.Analysis the data of sales.
4.Cooperate with sales specialist to finish the sales process successfully.
5.Also help executive department to recruit,design some rules and regulations .
Achievement
Be good at improve our hall management system and get the good commend form my colleague and the customer.
Harvest:
1.Accumulate some experiences of the position of Business assistant.
2.Upgrade my communication ability.
3.To possess a good consciousness of customer service.
SELFEVALUATION
Faster learner with good adaptability and creatively
Outgoing personality with enthusiasm
Strong responsibility and flexibility under high pressure ,good team player,
Good command of spoken and written English..
Possess keen in the sales and marketing.
INTEREST&PASSION
Music and movie
Reading
Curriculum Vitae
INDIVIDUALINFO
Chinese name:Cheng Liu
English name:Alex
Gender:Male
Tel:(+86)134-2442-0054 (+86)159-9961-4696
EDUCATIONBACKGROUND ChangChun University
Bachelor of Industrial and Commercial Management Earned in 2008/7
EMPLOYMENTHIGHLIGHTS:
Business Assistant:
Job Responsibility:
1.Take charge of calling and receipting the old customer to process their treatment on time as well as introducing the product information for them.
2.Customer data management.
3.Analysis the data of sales.
4.Cooperate with sales specialist to finish the sales process successfully.
5.Also help executive department to recruit,design some rules and regulations .
Achievement
Be good at improve our hall management system and get the good commend form my colleague and the customer.
Harvest:
1.Accumulate some experiences of the position of Business assistant.
2.Upgrade my communication ability.
3.To possess a good consciousness of customer service.
SELFEVALUATION
Faster learner with good adaptability and creatively
Outgoing personality with enthusiasm
Strong responsibility and flexibility under high pressure ,good team player,
Good command of spoken and written English..
Possess keen in the sales and marketing.
INTEREST&PASSION
Music and movie
Reading
1.就直接用Resume,这一点上用常用的就好
2."INDIVIDUALINFO" --- Personal Info.
3.电话写一个就好
4.出生日期或者年龄至少要有一项
5.Job responsibility的第一条 --- Take charge of 改成 Responsible for,receipting 改为receiving或answering; process their treatment?最后应该是to them.
6.Analysis the data of sales.--- Sales analysis
7.draw some rules and regulations
.自己还是再好好改一下,有些用词似乎不是很妥当,再注意下单复数,你们的客人或者同事都不止一个吧
2."INDIVIDUALINFO" --- Personal Info.
3.电话写一个就好
4.出生日期或者年龄至少要有一项
5.Job responsibility的第一条 --- Take charge of 改成 Responsible for,receipting 改为receiving或answering; process their treatment?最后应该是to them.
6.Analysis the data of sales.--- Sales analysis
7.draw some rules and regulations
.自己还是再好好改一下,有些用词似乎不是很妥当,再注意下单复数,你们的客人或者同事都不止一个吧