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请英语作文高手指导下!
some people have the silly thought that they can do everything with enough money,and this leads people to manage to get as much money as they can,even by breaking laws,which will cause increasing crime rate 这是关于金钱的文章,想问问修改的地方 “and this”那里怎么改能衔接好一点呢?还有需要修改的毛病吗?
The fact that some people have the silly thought that they can do everything with enough money leads people to managing to get as much money as they can,even by breaking laws,which will cause increasing crime rate
再问: 那个...能不能问下你QQ啊?
再答: 我不玩QQ,邮箱可以不?
再问: 你常上吗? 可以哦~谢谢