添改一篇英语作文.My favourite cartoonHi everyone,today i will talk a

添改一篇英语作文.
My favourite cartoon
Hi everyone,today i will talk about my favourite cartoon .He is name is Doraemon ．He was born on September the third ,2112.But he got the modern world by magic machine .Now he is lives in a boy's home and make friend with the boy called Daxiong .The boy always meeds problems .But Doraemon will help him in time .With the help of Doraemon.The boy can come over the difficult things well .But sometimes ,Doraemon makes the things worse .Doraemon loves Dousha Cake very much and he will hide away when he sees the mouse ,so he hates the mouse very much .When he won't eat his favourite food ,then he will became so angry .
I like Doraemon very much .Because he is very lovely and he always makes me happy.
除了修改文章之外,还必须添加上以下词汇：（可以加句子,但要通顺）
cartoon characters;not only……but also; be popular with; be shown on TV ; be loved by adults ;feel relaxed

My favourite cartoon
Hi,（添加逗号） everyone.(改为句号) Today I will talk about my favourite cartoon.（He is 改为）His name is Doraemon．He was born on September the third,2112.But he got to（另加介词 to）the modern world by magic machine.Now he (is lives 动词重复,删掉 is) lives in a boy's home and makes (make单数第三人称) friend with the boy called Daxiong The boy always meets with (meeds拼写与用法双重错误) problems,but Doraemon will not only comfort him but also help him in time.With the help of Doraemon,（改为逗号,后面的 The 小写） the boy can come through (come over 意思不对) the difficult things well.But sometimes,Doraemon makes (去掉the) things worse.Doraemon loves Dousha cake very much and he will hide it away （缺少宾语） when he sees the mouse,（此处不是结果而是原因so要改为because）because he hates the mouse very much.When he（时间状语从句中用现在时态表示将来won't）doesn’t eat his favourite food,(前面有了连词when,then多余) he will (became不能用过去式) become so angry.
(I 只是讲故事的人,所以最好还是回到故事里的人物Daxiong) Daxiong likes Doraemon very much,（改为逗号,后面的词小写）because he is very lovely and he always makes Daxiong happy.（后面添加）The family also like cartoon characters very much,so Doraemon is popular with them and is loved by the adults.They introduce him to be shown on TV.Living with the family,the cartoon feels relaxed.