求英语翻译检查With the further development of Marine economy, enter

求英语翻译检查
With the further development of Marine economy, enterprise to the ship's demand is higher and higher, especially on the ship's motor is increasing day by day. But it has continuously strengthened its performance at the same time, the protection of the motor monitoring instrument, relatively still lag behind relatively mature product is still not going to ship by testing. Based on the characteristics of ship propulsion motor, using the strong function of AT89S51 SCM and temperature sensors DS18B20 detection technology, preliminary build a motor testing system of temperature of the motor for a test.
The system is composed of parameters testing, collection and processing, LED display components. Parameter examination, collect and process mainly includes the read the temperature parameters, mainly through temperature sensor, amplifying circuit and MCU A/D input circuit, serial interface circuit components.
The LED display including LED to the selection, software programming debugging and other parts. In LED can display temperature concrete parameters.
Because the design experiment object ship for motor, I at school and no conditions to ship the motor on a real results observation, but I for Marine motor possible case has been predicted, this experiment in theory can be applied to practical monitoring system going. Can reflect propulsion motor state of real-time, for the following larger monitoring system study provide certain reference.

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