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修改英语作文是看图写日志的,就是说一个女孩骑自行车回家,(下雨天),从自行车上摔下来了,一个警察看见,并送她去医院,最后

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修改英语作文
是看图写日志的,就是说一个女孩骑自行车回家,(下雨天),从自行车上摔下来了,一个警察看见,并送她去医院,最后女孩向医生和警察说谢谢
我写的作文,帮我看看那里语法什么的有错误,如果有什么句子加上去,更好.
It was rain had yesterday.Rose went home by bike.Suddenly,she fall off her bike.She leg was badly hurt.The policeman saw her and helped her.He stop a taxi to go hospital nearly.The doctor was carefully looked over.After,she was fine.Rose said"Thank" to the doctor and policeman.
It was rainning,Rose went home by bike.Suddenly,she fell off her bike.Her leg was badly hurt.A policeman saw her and helped her.He stopped a taxi and they went to the nearest hospital.The doctor examined her carefully and told her that she was fine.In the end,Rose said "Thank you" to the doctor and the policeman.