】谁能帮我修改一下这首英文小诗?

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】谁能帮我修改一下这首英文小诗?
How Good Our Life
Shoots,shoots,
What green shooots they are!
They are appearing quietly now,
Spring have come back again.
Woods,woods,
What thick woods they are!
They are higher and higher,
Summer have come back again.
Coons,coons,
What dilgent coons they are!
They are looking for nuts now,
Autumn have come agian.
Wool,wool,
What white wool it is!
It is warming everyone's heart now,
Winter have come again.
Look,look!
How beautiful four seasons,
How good our life!

自己写得吗?很不错!有三处错误仅供参考意见：
1.How good our life is! (加is)
2.How beautiful four seasons are!(加are)
2. Spring/Summer/Autumn/Winter has come again.(have改has)

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