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初一英语改错题短文改错(其中有一行没有错误)I was born in May 8,1985.But I live in

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初一英语改错题
短文改错(其中有一行没有错误)
I was born in May 8,1985.But I live in Hangzhou because my father work here.Yesterday I got up early and wash my hands and face,I reached to my school very early,In class I worked hard,After the school my friends and I went home.On our ways home I bought a new watch,When I got home,I had rices and fishes for supper.I finished my homework at half to nine and went to my bed at ten.
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I was born on May 8 ,1985 .I live in Hangzhou because my father worked here.Yesterday I got up early and washed my hands and face .I reached my school very early.In the class I worked hard .After school I went home with my friends.On our ways home I bought a new watch.When I got home ,I had rice and fish for supper.I finished my homework at half past night and went to bed at ten.
解析:
*in May 8,1985 错在in 一词上.表示具体的某一天应该用on .in可以用来表示月,年等,但表示具体的某一天要用on
表示具体某一天的上午也用on ,如on Sunday morning.
*because 一词不能和but连用.要用because就不能加上but,否则就要but就不能加上because.但从第二句中使用but不能表达出原有的句意,因此要去掉but一词.
*wash和got up地位同等,因此也要转变成过去式washed.
*reach为及物动词,后面直接加上地点而不能加介词.
*第三行没有错误.
*fishes应改为fish.fish的单数,复数名词一样.文中
fish一词已经表示复数的fish了,而不必加上es.
*rice是米饭的意思,为不可数名词,不应该加s.
*九点半用不能用half past nine表示.
*went to my bed表示走到我的床边而上床睡觉应用went to bed来表示.