语法好者进我是一名英语初学者,在暑假写了几篇短文,请英语好的朋友帮忙看一下,是否有错误,谢谢 The most inte
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我是一名英语初学者,在暑假写了几篇短文,请英语好的朋友帮忙看一下,是否有错误,谢谢
The most interesting fastival
Some years ago,A new and interesting festival quickly catch on.That was Valentine's Day on February 14th.At that time every year.The lovers will be together.The boys give the girls roses.And the girls give the boys chocolates.Whenever that time,businessmen always can get so many money.So after some years,they found another Valentine's Day in July of the lunar calendar. That calls Chinese Valentine's Day.Then some businessmen catch this chance to make nice atmosphere and hold activities to make money.
For example.In the festival of this year,a jewelry store made a bridge called magpie bridge.Because the festival came from an old story between the lovers----Niu Lang and Zhi Nv.They loved each other very much.But they couldn’t stay together.So every year this time.Many magpies would get together and been a bridge to let them meet with each other.And the businessmen let the lovers write their vows and wishes on the papers,then put them on the bridge.And one day, the wishes and the vows will all come ture.
In this interesting festival,lovers will be very happy,and also businessmen can make money.That must call“make the best of both worlds”.
我是一名英语初学者,在暑假写了几篇短文,请英语好的朋友帮忙看一下,是否有错误,谢谢
The most interesting fastival
Some years ago,A new and interesting festival quickly catch on.That was Valentine's Day on February 14th.At that time every year.The lovers will be together.The boys give the girls roses.And the girls give the boys chocolates.Whenever that time,businessmen always can get so many money.So after some years,they found another Valentine's Day in July of the lunar calendar. That calls Chinese Valentine's Day.Then some businessmen catch this chance to make nice atmosphere and hold activities to make money.
For example.In the festival of this year,a jewelry store made a bridge called magpie bridge.Because the festival came from an old story between the lovers----Niu Lang and Zhi Nv.They loved each other very much.But they couldn’t stay together.So every year this time.Many magpies would get together and been a bridge to let them meet with each other.And the businessmen let the lovers write their vows and wishes on the papers,then put them on the bridge.And one day, the wishes and the vows will all come ture.
In this interesting festival,lovers will be very happy,and also businessmen can make money.That must call“make the best of both worlds”.
catch on->catched on(Some years ago是过去时)
At that time ->At this time
old story between ->old story about
That must call->That must be called(被称为)
At that time ->At this time
old story between ->old story about
That must call->That must be called(被称为)
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