作业帮求大神帮我修改一下这篇作文有问题的地方 然后发一下改后的作文
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求大神帮我修改一下这篇作文有问题的地方 然后发一下改后的作文
Hello,everyone.I am so glad to stand here.First of all,I will introduce myself.My name is zhou xiao meng I am fifteen years old .I have many hobbies,such as:play complay game.reding ,dancing sing song and paint.l dislike sports ,So,we can do exercises togher in the future.I also like help others,when you are in trouble,I will do anything that I can.Of course,I hope you my classmates can help me too.At the last,I wish we can become good friends Thank you!
Hello,everyone.I am so glad to stand here.First of all,I will introduce myself.My name is zhou xiao meng I am fifteen years old .I have many hobbies,such as:play complay game.reding ,dancing sing song and paint.l dislike sports ,So,we can do exercises togher in the future.I also like help others,when you are in trouble,I will do anything that I can.Of course,I hope you my classmates can help me too.At the last,I wish we can become good friends Thank you!
没大错!才15岁能写成这样,必须帮助!
Hello,everyone.I am so glad to stand here.First of all,I will introduce myself.My name is Zhou Xiao Meng（姓和名的首字母要大写） .I am fifteen years old .I have many hobbies,such as playing （要用动名词,后面也相同,之间用逗号） complay games,reading,dancing,singing songs and painting.l dislike sports ,So,we can do exercises together (togher) in the future.I also like help others,when you are in trouble,I will do anything that I can.Of course,I hope you,（后面是同位语,要用逗号隔开）my classmates,can help me too.At the last,I wish we can become good friends.Thank you!
Hello,everyone.I am so glad to stand here.First of all,I will introduce myself.My name is Zhou Xiao Meng（姓和名的首字母要大写） .I am fifteen years old .I have many hobbies,such as playing （要用动名词,后面也相同,之间用逗号） complay games,reading,dancing,singing songs and painting.l dislike sports ,So,we can do exercises together (togher) in the future.I also like help others,when you are in trouble,I will do anything that I can.Of course,I hope you,（后面是同位语,要用逗号隔开）my classmates,can help me too.At the last,I wish we can become good friends.Thank you!