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老师要的自我介绍 请帮我看一下语法之类的有没有错误 30分送上

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老师要的自我介绍 请帮我看一下语法之类的有没有错误 30分送上
Hello ,everybody.My name's Sabrina,Know why I do English name Sabrina?Sabrina is my favorite united States play the characters,I'm from HangZhou .It's really a fantacy place,people there are very friendly and helpful.I love it and hope that you can visite it someday.I was graduated from (你的初中) Junior high school,it's also a nice school.There're 3 people in my family,you know,my parents and I.We love each other and live a happy life.I usually Listen to American music and watching American TV in my spare time,and I think I'm good at sing English music.My dream is to sing a song with my favorite singer Taylor Swift ,So,you see,I'm really an easygoing girl.
allright,thank everyone.
有几处不对.
Hello ,everybody. My name's Sabrina,why do my English name is Sabrina? Sabrina is the name of the character of my favorite united States play . I'm from HangZhou .It's really a fantacy city, people there are very friendly and accommodating . I love it and hope that you can visit it someday. I graduated from (你的初中) Junior high school, it's also a nice school. There're 3 people in my family,you know,my parents and I. We love each other and live a happy life.I usually Listen to American music and watching American TV play in my spare time,and I think I'm good at sing English songs.My dream is to sing a song with my favorite singer Taylor Swift ,So,you see,I'm really an easygoing girl.
allright,thank everyone.

helpful是有用的意思,有几处用词不当