It is more important to choose friends that can have fun wit

It is more important to choose friends that can have fun with you than to choose friends that will help you when you need them.
One’s life can’t be
departed with friends.But as for the problem to chose which type of friends,
those have fun with you are those who help you when you need,every one have a
different choose.Personally,I prefer the latter one.
Actually,
those who will only make your laugh must have a propose.Usually ,they want to
obtain something from you.For example,my aunt,Jane ,once had a friend that
always make her happy when she was single.He always gave my aunt lots of presents or go travel with my
aunt.My aunt was pleased,and started to think about marry him.However,when
my aunt lost part of her fortune,(she was quite wealthy before) the man left
her without saying a word.We can find this type of stories on the newspaper
everyday,when we meet those who would do nothing but only have fun with you ,but
leave you or find an excuse when you ask for help,we shouldn’t be their
friends.
Second,I have to
say that true friend will not always please you .For example,in the book Emma,
Mr.knightly is Emma true friend,but he often told Emma her short points.Such
as after Emma laughed other people at the picnic,Mr.Knightly told her she was
to proud,that caused Emma quiet angry.But,due to Mr.knightly unwelcome
words,Emma changed to a better girl.That is to say,friends who always have
fun with you,appreciate you or please you,are not your true friends.Instead,
that are even bad for you.
In addition,as
the proverb runs,those who help you are your true friends.Really,friends are
those who care about you ,and give you a hand or undergo the trouble with you.
Certainly,we should choose then to be our friend.
So ,in short ,Certainly,we should choose
then to be our friend instead of those who can only make you feel happy.and Iwould to so .

It is more important to choose friends that can have fun with you than to choose friends that will help you when you need them.(其实按照整篇来看,作者要选的是能帮你的朋友而不是酒肉朋友,所以开头的这句话,顺序错了,应该为It is more important to choose friends who can help you out when you are in trouble than those can only have fun with you.)
One’s life can’t be departed with friends.But as for the problem（个人推荐用Point） to chose(Chose 应改成Choose,可能是拼写错误) which type of friends,
those have fun with you are those who help you when you need,every one have a
different choose（ Choose应该改成Choice.Have a choice是一个搭配.Choose是动词不能做名词）.Personally,I prefer the latter one.
Actually,
those who will only make your laugh must have a propose（Propose是Verb,可能是拼写错误,可能作者想拼成purpose.purpose:企图,目的）.Usually ,they want to
obtain （建议用get,Obtain一般指通过努力得到好的东西,词性带褒义.可用Get,中性色彩）something from you.For example,my aunt,Jane ,once had a friend that
always make her happy when she was single.He always gave my aunt lots of presents or go travel with my
aunt.My aunt was pleased,and started to think about marry him.However,when
my aunt lost part of her fortune,(she was quite wealthy before) the man left
her without saying a word.We can find this type of stories on the newspaper
everyday,when we meet those who would do nothing but only have fun with you ,but
leave you or find an excuse when you ask for help,we shouldn’t be their
friends.
Second,I have to
say that true friend will not always please you .For example,in the book Emma,
Mr.knightly is Emma true friend,but he often told Emma her short points.Such
as after Emma laughed other people at the picnic,Mr.Knightly told her she was
too proud,that made Emma quiet angry.But,due to Mr.knightly unwelcome
words,Emma have changed to a better girl.That is to say,friends who always have
fun with you,appreciate you or please you,are not all your true friends.Instead,
that are even bad for you.
In addition,as
the proverb runs,those who help you are your true friends.Really,friends are
those who care about you ,and give you a hand or undergo the trouble with you.
Certainly,we should choose then to be our friend.
So ,in short ,Certainly,we should choose
them to be our friend instead of those who can only make you feel happy.and Iwould to so .
在煲汤 还没看完 待会继续!有层次,思路很清晰.不错哦!