作业帮请帮我看看看,下面的汉语我用英语表达的对吗谢谢!
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请帮我看看看,下面的汉语我用英语表达的对吗谢谢!
Hello,my name is Tom,I have a happy weekend.Let me tell you.
I often get up at seven,have breakfast at half past seven.I usually do my homework in the morning.After lunch ,I go to stamp show.I like collecting stamps very much.In the evening,I watch TV with my parents.At nine,I go to bed.This is my weekends.How about you?
我有一个快乐的周末.我通常七点起床,七点半吃早饭.我通常在上午做作业.在下午,我去邮票展.我非常喜欢收集邮票.在晚上,我和父母一起看电视.在九点的时候,我上床睡觉.这是我的周末.你呢?
Hello,my name is Tom,I have a happy weekend.Let me tell you.
I often get up at seven,have breakfast at half past seven.I usually do my homework in the morning.After lunch ,I go to stamp show.I like collecting stamps very much.In the evening,I watch TV with my parents.At nine,I go to bed.This is my weekends.How about you?
我有一个快乐的周末.我通常七点起床,七点半吃早饭.我通常在上午做作业.在下午,我去邮票展.我非常喜欢收集邮票.在晚上,我和父母一起看电视.在九点的时候,我上床睡觉.这是我的周末.你呢?
写得非常好,语言又流畅,又生动.只是其中有两点想和你商榷,你看看是不是应该加上（见括号）.
1. I often get up at seven (and) have breakfast at half past seven.
2. After lunch, I go to (the) stamp show.
1. I often get up at seven (and) have breakfast at half past seven.
2. After lunch, I go to (the) stamp show.