我的孩子今年小学六年级了,面临着小升初的竞争；但老师总评价孩子写作文语言上还算比较流利,用词也比较丰富,可就是作文的深度

我的孩子今年小学六年级了,面临着小升初的竞争；但老师总评价孩子写作文语言上还算比较流利,用词也比较丰富,可就是作文的深度、高度不够；过去的一年多来,每次孩子写完作文我们一家人（包括爷爷、奶奶）都要给孩子提出一些建议,但孩子进步不大,如何才能提高孩子对作文立意上深度的挖掘呢?我们经常带孩子去过全国各地旅游,小孩也算见过一些市面,目的就是想让他见多识广.请有经验的家长或老师指点一下迷津?

My primary school in the second experiment, it is near my house, it is a great school, with more than 100 teachers. Of these, my favorite is my language teacher - Teacher Li.
Li, of medium build, tall上架着一副nose glasses, looks and gentle and polite, full of kindness. Do not think you can have our very lax teachers, teachers can be strict for us. Despite this, the students still very fond of her, because she, like her mother did love us.
I remember the third grade, we张荣源morning classes after school, students take advantage of a double shift is not a four-year, picked up his ball to play up the playground. Know the owner of the ball after furious. Some trivial matters have become a "martial arts battle."张荣源the boxes have been thrown into the ground, a meal to sprinkle. Lee teachers know, let me immediately to the office with two fellow students, ask the causes of the matter, kindly said to them: "We live in the family of schools, there should be mutual understanding, mutual help, with the error should be brave admit, this event will be of small, trivial and, the
It would not have been so serious, and you say it is the truth? "Convinced the two are to each other sincerely acknowledge the wrong. At this time, Li 5 out of money, the张荣源said:" The faster you buy lunch, not hungry belly. "
My poor stomach, often stomach pain. One day, my stomach pain, and to lie on the table, pale. Lee teachers see me as I know the pain闹肚子quickly help a student called me to the health room. Unfortunately, the doctor on duty leave, and I had no choice but to return to the classroom and clutching his stomach.见此scenarios, Li rushed to take me to the office,倒了杯水give me drink, I immediately spit out. No way, Lee had no choice but to call the teacher to meet my grandmother so. At the time, such as grandmother, Li patting my back side, while anxiously watch to see ... ...过了好久, but also to see grandma, Li said: "Well,
There is still some time away from school, I sent you, go home! "I said, patrol adulterated home.
Half on the road, I满眶tears止不住. I secretly determined: the future, I also do a teacher, such as Li did not only teach students the knowledge, but also to use their love to care for them.
Time flies, among the twinkling of an eye into the high school, the teachers you all right? Three years ago the autumn season, you give us that glimmer of a smile, that the words "believe in yourself and you can do it" gives us the inner world into a powerful driving force. I can clearly remember the day you first greeted a group of childish our children are not off, you kind of smile that I still remember so far.
You get used to class exultant, flying lessons under the expression, so we have to fall in love with your math classroom. You get used to Christmas. To the students each made of Christmas red, after graduating from the generosity invites us to eat, regardless of whether or not the remainder of the economy, you always used to say "brothers and sisters, like snowflakes," can we laugh拐个弯to you掉渣territories.
Under Section under Section Youtong you the Yin Yin Cantonese played a sad song, o-class students said that what she experienced, we have carefully inquired about the language teacher, used to be you on the Northeast Normal University after graduation, in order for the younger brother, sister university, the school sent on to give up just continue to seek opportunities to become a willing secondary school teachers, we say that you silly people, it was great that you may be accustomed to it that your brothers and sisters like snowflakes.
The experience of those of you still remain in the class style, rhythmic writing on the blackboard, thinking clear and thorough way, so that we can hardly go beyond the bounds of mathematics. Powder dust in three years time, your brother, sister who is already into an ideal university. You have always told us that hope that we can, like her siblings realize our vision, also said that the brothers and sisters are born of the snow, fell on the ground, into water, will no longer be separated from the. We believe that it is your sincere and then tell how heavy the weight is ... ...
Roadside tall poplars, swaying in the wind fine green leaves, made clear as the voice of water. Fresh leaves in the moonlight under the issue of mapping the faint sheen. Cool and spread over the夜风roaring, enough to make people feel more of them gliding. Dissemination of a silver-white tears deep breath quietly slipped, fell on the night mysterious and deep, spreading the wings fall youth, fell in the bottom of my heart where the softest.
Time flies!光阴似箭, now I have entered a middle school affiliated Chittagong, when you once again greeted with great emotion that we see you this group of children, you will certainly feel it no longer faces with childish face. Yes, we have grown up, love is no longer a group of crying children laugh love rough. Seedlings to absorb the rain the sun, coupled with the hard workers cultivation, germination could not grow it, you teach, we have never deviated from that for three years, we grew up your tolerance. However, a time when you look at your birthday, we always feel you're ready for gift giving and ashamed, but I know that "respect for the teaching profession do not have to gift-giving."
Good for you to tell the truth, and then added with deep feeling "good teacher!" You probably already very satisfied, because I believe that you never have to ask what to you.
Finally, I would like to tell you: "teachers, believe us, we can do it!"
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