英语翻译I am writingin response to the environmental problem tha

英语翻译
I am writing
in response to the environmental problem that whether global climate change is
man-made.As a human being,living in the earth,we should take a concern about
the global climate that affects our daily life since people emerging on land
but it is obvious that,subsequent to people appearing,the global climate has taken
a sharp turn becoming unpredictable and destroyable compared with the past.Without
any question,therefore,I strongly believe that we human are the main factor
of the global climate change.
When it
comes to the global climate change,beyond doubt,lots of people who are
opposed to this view think that the global climate change are nothing more than
a climate circulation of the earth.Admittedly,the change of global climate is
hinged on the natural regulation which has existed since for a very long time.Disappointedly,
according to the latest climate research,the increases of the temperature was
higher the noraml1.5c and these scientist forecasted the increasing will be
higher and higher in next few years.Moreover,in last 3 decades,the area of
melting glacier is growing and accelerating in a spin chilling speed,starting
from human appearing on the world and building up civilization.Obviously such
abnormal climate should not occur in our world with such terrific frequency,and
these phenomenal have already given us a caution that global climate change is
man-made.
In fact,
since industrial revolution,doubtlessly,our quality of life has taken an
inversion that the works mounted on the shoulder have become light but at the same
time,the betterment of life has brought us a great deal of pollutants hatching
out a poisonous consequences.Nowadays people are in pursuit of the convenience
and efficiency,being excessive reliance to fossil fuel for the machines
instead of workers.Even though these machines accommodate us in daily,the
machines emerge tons of toxic gases,when working.Such gases as carbon dioxide
carbon monoxide,sulphur dioxide are fatal and cause the climate change as the
gases have some furthers that observe the heat coming from the sun and keep the
earth warm foster the increases of temperature.
A side
from the reliance from the machine,the agriculture is also the main reasons of
the climate change.Without any question,forest,lungs of earth,is of
paramount significance especially in the South America,but with a little heed
of importance of the fortress being paid,a great amount of fortress was mashed
by the farming merchants who took an advantage of the fortress becoming a
steading.They,practically,did not care about what they done are conducive to
the health of the earth but their wealth as a result the climate was
deteriorated by human being evidently.
No timecan be afforded when it comes to the climate change.It’s time all parties
mentioned above paid attention to these serious problems.

I am writing in response to the environmental problem that whether (要加: or not the) global climate change is man-made. As a human being, living (in the 要改为 on) earth(Earth 尊有名词要大写), we should (去掉take a) concern about
the global climate that affects our daily life (去掉since people emerging on land)
but it is obvious that(去掉逗号,) subsequent to (people appearing要改为 the human presence), the global climate has taken
a sharp turn becoming unpredictable and (destroyable要改为 destructed) compared(compares) with the past(. Without
any question, 应该改为逗号 跟上句: , without any question) therefore(Therefore 新句开头要大写), I strongly believe that we human are the main factor
of the global climate change.

When it comes to the global climate change, beyond doubt, lots of people who are
opposed to this view think that the global climate change are nothing more than
a climate circulation of the earth(Earth). Admittedly, the change of global climate is
hinged on the natural regulation which has existed since for a very long time. Disappointedly,
according to the latest climate research, the increases of the temperature was
(higher the noraml1.5c 应该写成: 1.5C higher than normal) and these scientist(scientists) forecasted(forecast) the increasing(increase) will be
higher and higher in next few years. Moreover, in (the) last 3 decades, the area of
melting glacier is growing and accelerating in a spin chilling speed, starting
(from human appearing on the world and building up civilization 要改为: since the beginning of human civilization on world). Obviously such
abnormal climate should not occur in our world with such (terrific frequency 要改为: terrible speed), and these phenomenal(名词是: phenomenons) have already given us a caution that global climate change is man-made.

In fact, since industrial revolution, doubtlessly, our quality of life has taken an
inversion that the works mounted on the shoulder have become light but at the same
time, the betterment(betterments) of life has (have) brought us a great deal of pollutants hatching
out a poisonous consequences. Nowadays people are in pursuit of the convenience
and efficiency, being (excessive reliance to要改为: excessively relied on) fossil fuel for the machines
instead of workers. Even though these machines accommodate (us in daily要改为 our daily work loads), the
machines (emerge改为 emit) tons of toxic gases, when working. Such gases as carbon dioxide
carbon monoxide, sulphur dioxide are fatal and cause the climate change as the
gases have (some furthers that observe改为: risen to the upper atmosphere meeting with) the heat coming from the sun and keep the
earth(Earth) warm (foster the increases of temperature 要改为 causing the temperature to increase)
.

(A side from the reliance from the machine这句意思的表达含糊不清,要改为: Apart from the causes of machines reliance) , the agriculture is also the main reasons of
the climate change. Without any question, forest(s), lungs of earth(Earth), is of
paramount significance especially in the South America, but with a little heed
of importance of the fortress(forests) being paid, a great amount of fortress(forests) was mashed
by the farming merchants who took (去掉an) advantage ( of the fortress becoming a
steading 要改为: making the forests into steadings). They, practically, did not care about what they done are conducive to
the health of the earth(Earth) (or not) but their wealth(.句子完) as(As) a result(,) the climate was
deteriorated by human being evidently.

No time can be (afforded 要改为 wasted)(这段或许应该放在 change 的後面) when it comes to the climate change(s). It’s time all parties
mentioned above (should) paid attention to these serious problems.

When it comes to the climate changes, no time can be wasted.(我上面提过的建议)



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