作业帮英语短文改错请高手帮我改一下,急用,非常感谢
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英语短文改错请高手帮我改一下,急用,非常感谢
I'm a senior 3 student who take the College Entrance Exam soon.now I have a problem in choosing my major.My parents want me to study international business.therefore,my head teacher suggests that Ichose software engineering.As for me,I have a total different idea from them.Iwant to take environmental science for my major so that I can use that I have learned to help improving the environment in my hometown after the graduation.But can I possibly make a decision on my own against the will of my parents and my teavher?I'm writing to you for my opinion.Would you please spare some time to give me some advices?
I'm a senior 3 student who take the College Entrance Exam soon.now I have a problem in choosing my major.My parents want me to study international business.therefore,my head teacher suggests that Ichose software engineering.As for me,I have a total different idea from them.Iwant to take environmental science for my major so that I can use that I have learned to help improving the environment in my hometown after the graduation.But can I possibly make a decision on my own against the will of my parents and my teavher?I'm writing to you for my opinion.Would you please spare some time to give me some advices?
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I'm a senior 3 student who (加入will) take the College Entrance Exam soon.Now I have a problem in choosing my major.My parents want me to study international business.(However),my head teacher suggests that I (choose) software engineering.As for me,I have a (totally) different idea from them.I want to take environmental science (as) my major so that I can use (what) I have learned to help (improve) the environment in my hometown after (去掉the) graduation.But can I possibly make a decision (of) my own against the will of my parents and my teacher?I'm writing to you for (your) opinion.Would you please spare some time to give me some (advice)?
I'm a senior 3 student who (加入will) take the College Entrance Exam soon.Now I have a problem in choosing my major.My parents want me to study international business.(However),my head teacher suggests that I (choose) software engineering.As for me,I have a (totally) different idea from them.I want to take environmental science (as) my major so that I can use (what) I have learned to help (improve) the environment in my hometown after (去掉the) graduation.But can I possibly make a decision (of) my own against the will of my parents and my teacher?I'm writing to you for (your) opinion.Would you please spare some time to give me some (advice)?