作业帮求帮忙修改这篇作文的语法错误.
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求帮忙修改这篇作文的语法错误.
The appearance of solar car is similar to the ordinary car,but the solarcar getting energy from the sun light by it’s solar panels.
Comparedwith the ordinary car,the solar has the advantages with not only low noisey,non-pollution,pro-environment,but also small and easyto drive and park.
Also there are some disadvantages,such as the expensive price.
And the solar car is short of power that the hightest speed is 70 kilometers per hour.
With the biggest question,it just can dirve about 100 kilometers by every
charge.
水准已经不错...只是用词方面不熟悉.建议修改如下:
"A solar car is a solar vehicle used for land transport.Its appearance is fairly similar to ordinary cars but,instead of using gasoline,it depends solar panels which convert sunlight into electricity.
Compared with ordinary cars,a solar car has many advantages such as low noise,pollution-free,and environment friendly.Its size is also small and easy to drive or park.
On the other hand,there are some disadvantages.Its price is expensive,and under-powered.The hightest speed is 70 kilometers per hour.
The biggest PROBLEM (不是 question!) is that it can just move about 100 kilometers for every charge!"
再问： 呃 那我文章语法错误的点在哪？ 哪个点该怎么修改？
再答： The appearance of solar car is similar to the ordinary car,but the solarcar getting 错误 energy from the sun light by it’s错误 solar panels.
Compared with the错误 ordinary car,the solar [car] has the advantages with错误 not only low noisey错误,non-pollution错误 ,pro-environment错误,but also small and easy错误 to drive and park.
Also there are some disadvantages,错误 such as the expensive price错误.
And the solar car is short错误 of power that错误 the hightest speed is 70 kilometers per hour.
With the biggest question错误,it just can dirve about 100 kilometers by错误 every charge.
"A solar car is a solar vehicle used for land transport.Its appearance is fairly similar to ordinary cars but,instead of using gasoline,it depends solar panels which convert sunlight into electricity.
Compared with ordinary cars,a solar car has many advantages such as low noise,pollution-free,and environment friendly.Its size is also small and easy to drive or park.
On the other hand,there are some disadvantages.Its price is expensive,and under-powered.The hightest speed is 70 kilometers per hour.
The biggest PROBLEM (不是 question!) is that it can just move about 100 kilometers for every charge!"
再问： 呃 那我文章语法错误的点在哪？ 哪个点该怎么修改？
再答： The appearance of solar car is similar to the ordinary car,but the solarcar getting 错误 energy from the sun light by it’s错误 solar panels.
Compared with the错误 ordinary car,the solar [car] has the advantages with错误 not only low noisey错误,non-pollution错误 ,pro-environment错误,but also small and easy错误 to drive and park.
Also there are some disadvantages,错误 such as the expensive price错误.
And the solar car is short错误 of power that错误 the hightest speed is 70 kilometers per hour.
With the biggest question错误,it just can dirve about 100 kilometers by错误 every charge.