英文文章,求润色Chinese New Year is the most important festivity for

英文文章,求润色
Chinese New Year is the most important festivity for the Chinese people.It is also called the Spring Festival or the Lunar New Year.Chinese people light fireworks and firecrackers,they also wear new clothes with red.Do you know why?
旁白：Long long ago,there was a monster called NIAN.Nian was an enormous,ferocious,violent,single-horned wild beast,with sharp teeth and a long,powerful tail.It lived in the mountain in peacetime.Every new year’s eve,it came down to eat food.And it always ate people and people’s crop.
年：I am hungry!I want to eat something!wow,there is a village,there must be some people and I can eat them.I am hungry!
村民1：it’s NIAN!NIAN is coming to eat us!Help!
旁白：Many years later,with hundreds of people die,people knew a way to drive the monster away.
村民2：NIAN is afraid of red,blowout and fire.let’s put on red clothes and light bamboos.
村民1：And we can put some red paper on the door!
旁白：when NIAN came to the village,it saw the fire and red things.it is afraid and it could’t close villagers.
村民2：let’s begen splitting bamboo and making sure that the “pa pa” sound can be clearly heard.
村民1：yeah!look!NIAN is hearing the sound!it is taking off quickly!
村民合：we are winning!yeah!
旁白：After this,Nian never appeared again.But this custom continiues to today.now,people still wear red new clothes and light fireworks.
Every year has an animal’s name.These animals are the rat,ox,tiger,rabbit,dragon,snake,horse,ram,monkey,rooster,dog and pig.A Chinese legend says that these twelve animals had a race.The first year was named after the rat,the winner.The other eleven years were named after the order in which the animals arrived in the race.The clever rat jumped onto the ox’s back then at the end jumped over the ox’s head to arrive first!2010 is tiger year.tiger is a kind of beast.it symbols powerful,energy and brave.
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The Chinese New Year is the most important festival for the Chinese people.It is also called the Spring Festival or the Lunar New Year.The Chinese people light fireworks and firecrackers and dress themselves in red.Do you know why?
旁白：Long long ago,there was a monster called NIAN,who was an enormous,ferocious,violent,single-horned wild beast with sharp teeth and a long,powerful tail.It lived in the mountain in peace time.Every New Year's eve,it came down to feast on people and their harvests.
年：I am hungry!I want to eat something!Wow,a village out there!There must be people around there,and I can eat them.I am hungry!
村民1：It's NIAN!NIAN is coming to eat us!Help!
旁白：Many years later,with hundreds of people dead,people finally found a way to drive the monster away.
村民2：NIAN is afraid of red,blowout and fire.Let's dress in red light bamboos.
村民1：And we can put some red paper on the door!
旁白：When NIAN came to the village,it saw the fire and the red things.It was afraid and couldn't prey on villagers any more.
村民2：Let's begin splitting bamboos and making sure that the “pa pa” sound can be clearly heard.
村民1：Yeah!Look!NIAN is running off quickly on hearing the sound!
村民合：We are winning!Yeah!
旁白：After this,Nian never turned up again.But this custom continues,till today.Now,people still dress in red and light fireworks.
Each Chinese year has a name of an animal,including those of the rat,the ox,the tiger,the rabbit,the dragon,the snake,the horse,the ram,the monkey,the rooster,the dog and the pig.A Chinese legend says that these twelve animals once had a race.The first year was named after the rat,the winner.The other eleven years were named after the order in which the animals arrived at the finishing line.The clever rat jumped onto the ox’s back and in the end jumped over the ox’s head to arrive first!2010 is the year of the tiger.The tiger is a kind of fierce beast.It symbolizes power,energy and bravery.