短文改错 Today after school I paid a visit for my friend who inj

短文改错 Today after school I paid a visit for my friend who injured her during training.Icame home late at night .It was too cold that there were few people in the stree.Being alone,I felt a bit scaring,but I couldn't walk fast dut to my heavy schoolbag.Sudden I saw something jump out from behind a parked car ahead.I couldn't help cry.Because I am short-sighted,I didn't see clearly where it was.I begin to run and couldn't wait to get home.As the thing got more closer and closer,I found that it was actually dog.I breathed a sigh of relief and hurried home.

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Today after school I paid a visit (for改成to) my friend who injured (her改成herself) during training. I came home late at night. It was (too改成so) cold that there were few people in the stree. Being alone, I felt a bit (scaring改成scared), but I couldn't walk fast due to my heavy schoolbag. (Sudden改成Suddenly) I saw something jump out from behind a parked car ahead. I couldn't help (cry改成crying). Because I (am改成was) short-sighted, I didn't see clearly (where改成what) it was. I (begin改成began) to run and couldn't wait to get home. As the thing got (去掉more) closer and closer, I found that it was actually (加入a) dog. I breathed a sigh of relief and hurried home.

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再问： 能不能告诉我为什么这样改！谢谢！
再答： 固定短语pay a visit to sb 拜访某人who指My friend，和her为同一人，所以用反身代词herself固定句型so...that...scaring 令人害怕的；scared 感到害怕的做状语用副词suddenly，sudden是形容词固定短语can't help doing sth 禁不住做某事整篇都用过去时，所以用was不用amwhat it was 它是什么；where it was 它在哪里过去时begancloser本身就是比较级，其前无须再加moredog为可数名词，泛指时前面不能烧掉a
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再问： 额… 我睡觉了 拜拜
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