作业帮一片英语小短文麻烦检查一下有错吗
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一片英语小短文麻烦检查一下有错吗
my sunday
It's sunday today.I got up at 8 o'clock.Then I washed my face and brushed my teeth.I cleaned my room too.I had breakfast at half past five.And then I go for a walk in the park near my home.I did my homework at ten o'clock.I had lunch at 12 o'clock.I went shopping in the afternoon.I also played computer games.In the evening,I watched TV.I go to bed at ten o'clock.
my sunday
It's sunday today.I got up at 8 o'clock.Then I washed my face and brushed my teeth.I cleaned my room too.I had breakfast at half past five.And then I go for a walk in the park near my home.I did my homework at ten o'clock.I had lunch at 12 o'clock.I went shopping in the afternoon.I also played computer games.In the evening,I watched TV.I go to bed at ten o'clock.
你8点起床床,5点半吃早饭.语法也有错"It's sunday today"这句错了,应该是"Yesterday is sunday"
Then I washed my face and brushed my teeth andI cleaned my room too.不能直接加too
And then I go for a walk in the park near my home改为And then I went for a walk in the park near my home
I went shopping in the afternoon.加上and I also played computer games不然就别加also
Then I washed my face and brushed my teeth andI cleaned my room too.不能直接加too
And then I go for a walk in the park near my home改为And then I went for a walk in the park near my home
I went shopping in the afternoon.加上and I also played computer games不然就别加also