作业帮 > 英语 > 作业

哪位英语高手帮我看一下这篇英语作文有没有语法错误啊,下午就要交了

来源:学生作业帮 编辑:作业帮 分类:英语作业 时间:2024/05/16 23:25:30
哪位英语高手帮我看一下这篇英语作文有没有语法错误啊,下午就要交了
Lily
Lily is a 13 years old girl and she is my best friend.She is very friendly to everyone,so I like playing with her.She is my classmate,too.
Lily lives in a small house near my home,so we always play together.She is an only child in her family.I am an only child,too.So we are just like full sisters.
Lily is good at English,and my worst subject at school is English,so I often ask hers some question.She like playing the piano,she won lots of prizes in the piano match.She wants to be a pianist.
This is my best friend Lily,do you want to make friend with her?
大家回答的都不错...能不能再综合点?
应该是she likes 是打错了吧
句子开头都用she 是不是觉得很冗乱呢
再问: 嗯。可以帮帮我怎么改一下吗