作文修改!帮忙看下以下作文,或有语法错误或用词不当,或是你有更好,更有水平的句子来替代某一句,都来帮忙下,My favo

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作文修改!
帮忙看下以下作文,或有语法错误或用词不当,或是你有更好,更有水平的句子来替代某一句,都来帮忙下,
My favourite sport
Life lies in motion.Everyone has their favorite sports.And I like playing table tennis best.It brings me a great amount of happiness when I play table tennis.
When i feel stressed in study,playing table tennis can relax myself.I will go to play table tennis if i have spare time.Playing table tennis becomes a necessary activity in my life.
Alought I am not good at playing table tennis,ican get a lot of fun from it.

My favourite sport
Life lies in motion.Everyone has their(是不是改成"his/her"好一点) favorite sports.And I like playing table tennis best.It brings me a great amount of happiness when I play table tennis.
When i feel stressed in study,playing table tennis can relax myself.I will go to play table tennis if i have spare time.Playing table tennis becomes a necessary activity in my life.
Alought I am not good at playing table tennis,ican get a lot of fun from it.
语法错误是没有楼主的作文很是标准的哇不过再变化些事态啊什么的会更好看一点……比如Playing table tennis becomes（has become） a necessary activity in my life.
整体很通畅~very good~

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