作业帮帮我看看我的英语文章有没有错误噢 谢谢拉
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帮我看看我的英语文章有没有错误噢 谢谢拉
Dear Mr. Cooper
I’m writing this to make enquiry about your advertisement which is advertised in China Daily on 15th August. We have studied the advertisement and we are deeply interested in getting more information in details.
1. We need to know the star rate and exactly locations about the international hotels you mentioned.
2. I want to know whether you have any other necessary facilities such as large screen and microphone in the conference rooms.
3. About the meeting room discount, can we get more discounts if we order a whole year?
4. Can you provide us a flexible floor for us? We need to redesign the rooms to a café bar and a reading room.
We do hope to receive your reply with further information before 28th August.
Look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Greg Cai
Dear Mr. Cooper
I’m writing this to make enquiry about your advertisement which is advertised in China Daily on 15th August. We have studied the advertisement and we are deeply interested in getting more information in details.
1. We need to know the star rate and exactly locations about the international hotels you mentioned.
2. I want to know whether you have any other necessary facilities such as large screen and microphone in the conference rooms.
3. About the meeting room discount, can we get more discounts if we order a whole year?
4. Can you provide us a flexible floor for us? We need to redesign the rooms to a café bar and a reading room.
We do hope to receive your reply with further information before 28th August.
Look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Greg Cai
enquiry改为复数形式
1.exactly是副词,应该为exact locations 而且觉得后面用of比about好
2.screen和microphine加s
3.最好改为：Can we have more discounts if we make a annual reservation?
4.去掉第一个us,to改成into 或者with
look 改为looking
其他地方问题不大.
1.exactly是副词,应该为exact locations 而且觉得后面用of比about好
2.screen和microphine加s
3.最好改为：Can we have more discounts if we make a annual reservation?
4.去掉第一个us,to改成into 或者with
look 改为looking
其他地方问题不大.