作业帮学校英语征文,请人帮我看看我的文章有没有什么语法错误要修改
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学校英语征文,请人帮我看看我的文章有没有什么语法错误要修改
As we all know,Australia is a country which takes up a whole oceania.and the people there most be kindful and love labor,So Australia is called “Acountry that is riding on the sheep’s back’’ Everyone has at least 17 sheep.And the country has pretty rich mineral resources,So we also said that this is a country which sitting in the carts.
The animals there are attractive me a lot,expectrally the Kangaroo,Platypus,Emu and Koala.Some of them are very lovely I thought.Also,the plants there has more than 12000 than other 9000 countries.How amazing the country is!
However I watched an Australia film and I thought the spoken English there is strange to me and it is hard for me to understand the people said without the Chinese subtitle.But I will try my best to study English hard because I am so interesting in the culture of Australia.
Last but not least,I found in this country people’s work are easy and everyone can have a trip every year.The student in there is not so the same as in China,They are freedom in their school and have more time to have fun with friends,but they are good at thinking and practice.That’s the reason why they could study more easier than Chinese student.
As the time goes by I will know more about this beautiful country and I wish someday I could travel around this country when I finished my college.Maybe then I will see more interesting things in Australia with my eyes!
As we all know,Australia is a country which takes up a whole oceania.and the people there most be kindful and love labor,So Australia is called “Acountry that is riding on the sheep’s back’’ Everyone has at least 17 sheep.And the country has pretty rich mineral resources,So we also said that this is a country which sitting in the carts.
The animals there are attractive me a lot,expectrally the Kangaroo,Platypus,Emu and Koala.Some of them are very lovely I thought.Also,the plants there has more than 12000 than other 9000 countries.How amazing the country is!
However I watched an Australia film and I thought the spoken English there is strange to me and it is hard for me to understand the people said without the Chinese subtitle.But I will try my best to study English hard because I am so interesting in the culture of Australia.
Last but not least,I found in this country people’s work are easy and everyone can have a trip every year.The student in there is not so the same as in China,They are freedom in their school and have more time to have fun with friends,but they are good at thinking and practice.That’s the reason why they could study more easier than Chinese student.
As the time goes by I will know more about this beautiful country and I wish someday I could travel around this country when I finished my college.Maybe then I will see more interesting things in Australia with my eyes!
你这个语法错误太多了,亲,而且Chinglish太严重,你去句酷批改网吧,看看,因为错误太多.
The animals there are attractive me a lot例如这一句,很明显attractive是个形容词啊,后面怎么能me呢?
The animals there are attractive me a lot例如这一句,很明显attractive是个形容词啊,后面怎么能me呢?