作业帮请帮我修改一下这篇英语演讲稿,有没语法错误
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请帮我修改一下这篇英语演讲稿,有没语法错误
Nothing is impossible
Hello everyone,before the talk,I want to talk something about Wang Shouren.
he had ever said that he wants to be a sage like Confucius.But the only thing he got was the loud laugh.
To be honest,there are few people able to be called "sage".It seemed that the dream was impossible of achievement.
However,he kept holding on.
On the road to the dream,he met lots of changellenges,but he kept up.
19 years later,he created the Shingaku and finally made his dream come true.
See,dreams always seem reachless before it come true.But if we work hard and never give up,we'll succeed.Nothing is impossible for one who sets his mind on it,isn't it?
That's all.Thank you for your listening.
特别是
there are few people able to be called "sage".
和he kept holding on有没有错
Nothing is impossible
Hello everyone,before the talk,I want to talk something about Wang Shouren.
he had ever said that he wants to be a sage like Confucius.But the only thing he got was the loud laugh.
To be honest,there are few people able to be called "sage".It seemed that the dream was impossible of achievement.
However,he kept holding on.
On the road to the dream,he met lots of changellenges,but he kept up.
19 years later,he created the Shingaku and finally made his dream come true.
See,dreams always seem reachless before it come true.But if we work hard and never give up,we'll succeed.Nothing is impossible for one who sets his mind on it,isn't it?
That's all.Thank you for your listening.
特别是
there are few people able to be called "sage".
和he kept holding on有没有错
Nothing is impossible
Hello everyone,before the talk,I want to talk something about Wang Shouren.
he had ever said that he wants to be a sage like Confucius.But the only thing 加上(that)he got was the loud laugh.
To be honest,there are few people 加上(which are) [able to be]改成【qualified to be】 called "sage".It seemed that the dream was impossible [of achievement]改成【to achieve】.
However,he kept holding on.
On the [road]改成【way】 to the dream,he met lots of [changellenges]拼错,应是【challenges】（你是想表达“他遇到很多困难”吧?那应用difficulties）,but he kept up(后面不加obj.的话最好改成but his spirit still kept up well.意谓尽管遭受挫折, 他仍旧充满斗志.).
19 years later,he created the Shingaku and finally made his dream come true.
See（这里完全是Chinese English,应改为By this token,即由此看来）,dreams always seem reachless before it come true.But if we work hard and never give up,we'll succeed.Nothing is impossible for [one who](这里要强调语气,最好改成anyone that) sets his mind on it,isn't it?
(That's all.Thank you for your listening. )结束语太老套,而且第二句是英语听力的结束语!试试这个That's the end of my speech,thank you very much for being here.
Hello everyone,before the talk,I want to talk something about Wang Shouren.
he had ever said that he wants to be a sage like Confucius.But the only thing 加上(that)he got was the loud laugh.
To be honest,there are few people 加上(which are) [able to be]改成【qualified to be】 called "sage".It seemed that the dream was impossible [of achievement]改成【to achieve】.
However,he kept holding on.
On the [road]改成【way】 to the dream,he met lots of [changellenges]拼错,应是【challenges】（你是想表达“他遇到很多困难”吧?那应用difficulties）,but he kept up(后面不加obj.的话最好改成but his spirit still kept up well.意谓尽管遭受挫折, 他仍旧充满斗志.).
19 years later,he created the Shingaku and finally made his dream come true.
See（这里完全是Chinese English,应改为By this token,即由此看来）,dreams always seem reachless before it come true.But if we work hard and never give up,we'll succeed.Nothing is impossible for [one who](这里要强调语气,最好改成anyone that) sets his mind on it,isn't it?
(That's all.Thank you for your listening. )结束语太老套,而且第二句是英语听力的结束语!试试这个That's the end of my speech,thank you very much for being here.