PLEASE HELP ME MODIFY MY composition,thank you very much

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PLEASE HELP ME MODIFY MY composition,thank you very much
As a chinese girl,I'm pround of the olympic hold in beijing.and I hope China will win the first.Even now i live in Holand,but everyday I watch TV,and everytime when I saw the Chinese win,I feel exciting.
As a chinese girl,I'm pround of the Olympic Games is held in beijing.and I hope China will win the first.Even now I'm living in Holand,but everyday I watch TV,and everytime when I see the Chinese win,I feel exciting.
ACCORDING TO回答者：十七点零九 - 见习魔法师三级 ,I HAD CHANGED,IF HAVE ANOTHER ERROR I NEED CHANGE?

1 Olympic Games 正确写法
2 hold 要用被动
3 现在身在进行时较好吧
4 最后一句的时态请统一

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