作业帮Help me to check my homework
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Help me to check my homework
I am not good at English,I hope everyone can help me to find some mistakes in my diary.(It is my homework.)
---------------------------I am a boundary--------------------
Thursday 1st,February Fine
Our school needed some students to clean the playground,my teacher found me to do it.But I had a cold at that time,it may would be not easy to finish this job.
When I got up in the morning,I just knew I was late for it!My teacher was calling me,then I ran to school.I was afraid that it made my teacher angry.
I arrived in school for a moment,there were some students on the playground,they were sweeping the floor at present.My teacher found me,and she knew I had a cold,so she didn't angry.
A long time past.Although we had free time at school,and we could play sports there,I was tired because of the cold.I hoped I would be better soon.
I am not good at English,I hope everyone can help me to find some mistakes in my diary.(It is my homework.)
---------------------------I am a boundary--------------------
Thursday 1st,February Fine
Our school needed some students to clean the playground,my teacher found me to do it.But I had a cold at that time,it may would be not easy to finish this job.
When I got up in the morning,I just knew I was late for it!My teacher was calling me,then I ran to school.I was afraid that it made my teacher angry.
I arrived in school for a moment,there were some students on the playground,they were sweeping the floor at present.My teacher found me,and she knew I had a cold,so she didn't angry.
A long time past.Although we had free time at school,and we could play sports there,I was tired because of the cold.I hoped I would be better soon.
"my teacher found me to do it."中的found不如改成asked吧,因为found的意思是老师发现你在干什么,而asked有要求,命令的意思.
"it may would be not easy to finish this job."是的"may would be not"改成"might not be"就行了,may和would均为情态动词,用得重复了吧.might是may的过去式.而且否定词not应紧跟情态动词,而位于be动词前.
"my teacher was calling me."改成"my teacher called me"吧,用过去进行时的话表示什么呢?老师正在给你打电话?不太合适吧,个人意见而已,
"I arrived in school for a moment"中in改成on,毕竟学校是个小地方吧呵呵,in后接大地方,比如城市啊,国家啊什么的.另外,for改成after,表示过了不久你就到了学校,for表示动作的持续,而你这一句里的动词是arrive,是非持续性动词.
"they were sweeping the floor at present"中at present不如改成at that time,at present只能表示现在吧!
"so she didn't angry"angry是形容词,前面怎么能用助动词呢?用wasn't吧!
" play sports "中play改成do吧,play后接具体的运动,如football,basketball and so on,而sports是个抽象名词,应该用do的.
以上仅是个人意见和观点,你批判性地看吧~^-^
"it may would be not easy to finish this job."是的"may would be not"改成"might not be"就行了,may和would均为情态动词,用得重复了吧.might是may的过去式.而且否定词not应紧跟情态动词,而位于be动词前.
"my teacher was calling me."改成"my teacher called me"吧,用过去进行时的话表示什么呢?老师正在给你打电话?不太合适吧,个人意见而已,
"I arrived in school for a moment"中in改成on,毕竟学校是个小地方吧呵呵,in后接大地方,比如城市啊,国家啊什么的.另外,for改成after,表示过了不久你就到了学校,for表示动作的持续,而你这一句里的动词是arrive,是非持续性动词.
"they were sweeping the floor at present"中at present不如改成at that time,at present只能表示现在吧!
"so she didn't angry"angry是形容词,前面怎么能用助动词呢?用wasn't吧!
" play sports "中play改成do吧,play后接具体的运动,如football,basketball and so on,而sports是个抽象名词,应该用do的.
以上仅是个人意见和观点,你批判性地看吧~^-^
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