作业帮[英语短文] 求揪出语病.（一般现在时）
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[英语短文] 求揪出语病.（一般现在时）
Shenzhen City
Shenzhen is a beautiful city.There are many large parks in Shenzhen .
Many people like taking walk in these parks.There are also many trees and flowers in Shenzhen.
The greenery is a decoration for the city.
If you like going shopping,you can come to Wanpan shop.There are also many wood furniture in large supermarket.
For some men,Shenzhen is a large warm homestead.
Shenzhen City
Shenzhen is a beautiful city.There are many large parks in Shenzhen .
Many people like taking walk in these parks.There are also many trees and flowers in Shenzhen.
The greenery is a decoration for the city.
If you like going shopping,you can come to Wanpan shop.There are also many wood furniture in large supermarket.
For some men,Shenzhen is a large warm homestead.
第三行 enjoy walking会好些 如果不想改动太大就变成taking walks
第五行 wood furnitures
如果是一个supermarket就要在large前加the
最后一行 men改为people,men只指代男人
第五行 wood furnitures
如果是一个supermarket就要在large前加the
最后一行 men改为people,men只指代男人