作业帮大家来帮我看个英语演讲稿,找找有没有语法错误.
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大家来帮我看个英语演讲稿,找找有没有语法错误.
Hello,everybody.My name is David.It's my honor to be here today to give you this speech.My topic is "the pains of growing up".
When I was a child,I hoped to grow up immediately.However,having grown up,how I wish I was a child!Once we grow up,the carefree time have flown away and there are so many pains waiting for us!
First comes the pains of studying.Exactly,studying itself is pleasant.What pains us are exams and scores.We have to study those not interesting subjects and try to get high scores in exams.It's really painful.
We also suffer from dealing with others.Sometimes we may fInd that some people are hard to get along with.Sometimes we may quarrel with intimate friends.Such things always hurt our feelings.
Parents may bring us pains,too.We think they don't understand us.They forbid us to do what interests us and force us to do what we hate.They keep telling us what to do and what not to do as is we knew nothing.They don't really care what is in our mind.
Later,some may suffer pains of losing love,pains of working and then of supporting a family.
Growing up seems to mean endless pains,.So many people wish to return to childhood.
But you know,that's impossible.We can do nothing but stand up and overcome them,even enjoy them and shoulder our responsibilities.
My dear friends,don't be afraid of growing up!Don't be afraid of pains.No pains,no gains.Only after tasting pains can we better enjoy sweetness and happiness.Let's grow up in pains,grow up from pains.
Thank you!
能不能帮我找找有没有语法错误..
Hello,everybody.My name is David.It's my honor to be here today to give you this speech.My topic is "the pains of growing up".
When I was a child,I hoped to grow up immediately.However,having grown up,how I wish I was a child!Once we grow up,the carefree time have flown away and there are so many pains waiting for us!
First comes the pains of studying.Exactly,studying itself is pleasant.What pains us are exams and scores.We have to study those not interesting subjects and try to get high scores in exams.It's really painful.
We also suffer from dealing with others.Sometimes we may fInd that some people are hard to get along with.Sometimes we may quarrel with intimate friends.Such things always hurt our feelings.
Parents may bring us pains,too.We think they don't understand us.They forbid us to do what interests us and force us to do what we hate.They keep telling us what to do and what not to do as is we knew nothing.They don't really care what is in our mind.
Later,some may suffer pains of losing love,pains of working and then of supporting a family.
Growing up seems to mean endless pains,.So many people wish to return to childhood.
But you know,that's impossible.We can do nothing but stand up and overcome them,even enjoy them and shoulder our responsibilities.
My dear friends,don't be afraid of growing up!Don't be afraid of pains.No pains,no gains.Only after tasting pains can we better enjoy sweetness and happiness.Let's grow up in pains,grow up from pains.
Thank you!
能不能帮我找找有没有语法错误..
Hello,everybody.My name is David.It's my honor to be here today to give you this speech.My topic is "the pains of growing up".
When I was a child,I hoped to grow up immediately.However,（when i really grow up 始终觉得你的原句有问题）,how I wish I（were虚拟语气） a child!Once we grow up,the carefree time (flows away,too.其实演讲趋于口语化,我觉得可以少用那些完成时等很注重语法的句子较好).and there are so many pains waiting for us!
First （the pain of studying） comes .Exactly,studying itself is pleasant.(What bring us pain) are exams and scores.We have to study those (boring/dull) subjects(或者which we aren't interested in） and try to get high scores in exams.It's really painful.
We also suffer from dealing with others.Sometimes we may fInd that some people are hard to get along with.Sometimes we may quarrel with intimate friends.Such things always hurt our feelings.
Parents may bring us pains,too.We think they don't understand us.They forbid us to do what interests us and force us to do what we hate.They keep telling us what to do and what not to do as （if） we knew nothing.They don't really care what is in our mind.
Later,some may suffer pains of losing love,pains of working and then of supporting a family.
Growing up seems to mean endless pains,.So many people wish to return to childhood.
But you know,that's impossible.We can do nothing but stand up and overcome them,even enjoy them and shoulder our responsibilities.
My dear friends,don't be afraid of growing up!Don't be afraid of pains.No pains,no gains.Only after tasting pains can we better enjoy sweetness and happiness.Let's grow up in pains,grow up from pains.
Thank you（只找到几处小错误,或不太适当的地方,已改过来.稿子挺好的~）
When I was a child,I hoped to grow up immediately.However,（when i really grow up 始终觉得你的原句有问题）,how I wish I（were虚拟语气） a child!Once we grow up,the carefree time (flows away,too.其实演讲趋于口语化,我觉得可以少用那些完成时等很注重语法的句子较好).and there are so many pains waiting for us!
First （the pain of studying） comes .Exactly,studying itself is pleasant.(What bring us pain) are exams and scores.We have to study those (boring/dull) subjects(或者which we aren't interested in） and try to get high scores in exams.It's really painful.
We also suffer from dealing with others.Sometimes we may fInd that some people are hard to get along with.Sometimes we may quarrel with intimate friends.Such things always hurt our feelings.
Parents may bring us pains,too.We think they don't understand us.They forbid us to do what interests us and force us to do what we hate.They keep telling us what to do and what not to do as （if） we knew nothing.They don't really care what is in our mind.
Later,some may suffer pains of losing love,pains of working and then of supporting a family.
Growing up seems to mean endless pains,.So many people wish to return to childhood.
But you know,that's impossible.We can do nothing but stand up and overcome them,even enjoy them and shoulder our responsibilities.
My dear friends,don't be afraid of growing up!Don't be afraid of pains.No pains,no gains.Only after tasting pains can we better enjoy sweetness and happiness.Let's grow up in pains,grow up from pains.
Thank you（只找到几处小错误,或不太适当的地方,已改过来.稿子挺好的~）