求批改TPO4独立写作：In twenty years,there will be fewer cars in use

求批改TPO4独立写作：In twenty years,there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
It’s a common scene that roads are filled with cars in major cities.Meanwhile,people suffer from traffics and noises cause by cars.In order to solve these problems,governments take a great deal of methods to cut down the number of cars.Some are quite efficacious.Base on all information I have got,I agree that there will be fewer cars in twenty years.
The main reason for me to support this statement is that governments have become aware of the severity of environment problems and start paying efforts to deal with it.And one of the factors that caused air pollution is poison gas exhausted by car.Thus,the rigorous rules are made,the car prices are higher,even the possibility of getting a license plate is lower than before.For instance,cars in major cities like Beijing are allowed to drive on main road only six days a week.Drivers need to wait to get license plates because the number of the plate is limited.All these aimed to improve our living conditions.According to the actions taken by governments,we can see the decision of saving the environment.Therefore,I believe the number of car will decrease in twenty years.
Another reason that can’t be ignored is the development of subway provides people with a preferable choice.It’s more convenient to take subway because it frees people from traffic jams.Take myself as an example,I go to school by subway since seven years ago and never be late for morning classes.When other students are besieging with cars,I am already get there.Subway is not only time-saving,but also money-saving.With the increasing price of parking and fuel,taking subway is more economic.
I realize why people want to possess car.As the manager in Beijing automobile exchange centre says:cars are something that people in every country want to own.But I believe car’s number is going to dwindle.That makes a better environment and a healthier life for every person.

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