第二卷第三部分：写作（共两节，满分35 分）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10 分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间

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第二卷
第三部分：写作（共两节，满分35 分）
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及每一个词的增加删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处增加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词后面写出修改后的词
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I want to work as a tour guide after my graduation from college. The first reason is that I can devote myself for work after years of hard learning. Be interested in my career, I will fix my mind on my job to show my talent and make a contribution to the society, but I can realize the meaning of life. Secondly, I can make my dream of traveling around the world came true. While experiencing difference cultures, I will give my helping hands to who are in need of help along my way. Last, it was high time that I should shoulder the duties. I should do something for my parents and other family member because they had been giving so much love to them while I was growing up.

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