英语翻译随着互联网在经济活动中的广泛运用,人们对网络的依赖越来越强烈,网络正在不知不觉中改变着当今社会的生活状态和生活方

英语翻译
随着互联网在经济活动中的广泛运用,人们对网络的依赖越来越强烈,网络正在不知不觉中改变着当今社会的生活状态和生活方式.凭借互联网无地域限制的优势,消除了产品、服务供应商和需求者之间地点与距离相关的障碍,一些传统的生产厂家及销售企业都加入到了电子商务的行列.电子商务的兴起 ,开创了全球性的商务革命和经营革命,并逐步成为一种极重要的商务方式.
我国经济正逐渐成为以互联网、通信技术为基础的新经济.网上购物作为新型的消费模式,它也存在一些问题,不仅需要市场调节也需要政府和商家做出自己的努力.

楼上的真是够懒的,就这么简单一段翻译还得靠机器复制粘贴过来
二楼在机器翻译的基础上改了跟没改也差不多,看看二楼的这句 Relying on the Internet's limtless advantages of regional restrictions, eliminate product, service providers and demanders with distance between site related to the disorder.这个句子从头读到尾,我也没找到到底哪个是主语,哪个是谓语,完全不成句子.还有The rise of e-commerce, creating a global business revolution and management revolution, and gradually become a very important business mode. 这个句子,and之前连个谓语动词都没有,如何能并列?
给楼主我的手工翻译
As the Internet is widely used in economic activities,people are becoming increasingly dependent on the Internet,which is imperceptibly changing contemporary society's living states and lifestyles.By virtue of its advantage of overcoming regional limits,the Internet has eliminated the barriers relating to space and distance between the suppliers and demanders of products and services, and many traditional manufacturing and marketing enterprises have engaged in e-commerce business.The emergence of e-commerce has initiated a global business revolution and operational revolution, and has gradually become a highly important business model.
Our country's economy is gradually becoming a new economy based on the Internet and communication technology.Online shopping,as a newly born consumption model,indeed has some problems,which need to be resolved through not only market regulation but also the efforts of all enterprises.
刚刚看了楼下,四楼的别复制粘贴我的译文啊,自己动手多好