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帮忙修改下英语作文 特别是语法,是连贯性

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帮忙修改下英语作文 特别是语法,是连贯性
One day ,a little boy and his mother were sitting on the bus.A old woman got on the bus.
There was no seat left for the old woman .A yang man who smoking pretended not to see the old woman .''hi ,sit here!''a little boy said.people saw the litlle boy .He puiied the old woman to his seat .
All of people smiled at the little boy.The little boy felt happy
.He puiied the old woman to his seat ..改为He pulled the old woman to his seat .
One day ,a little boy and his mother were sitting on the bus.An old woman got on the bus.
There were no seat left for the old woman .A young man smoking on the chair pretended to haven't seen the old woman .''hi ,sit here!'',by saying this ,All passengers took a look at the litlle boy ,when he pulling the old woman to his seat .
All passengers smiled at the little boy,and the little boy felt happy