英语：以 My Friend 为题,写一篇70词左右的短文,

英语：以 My Friend 为题,写一篇70词左右的短文,
根据下面所提供的英文信息,以 My Friend 为题,写一篇70词左右的短文
1.Tom ,New york,16,tall and strong,byown hair,coll
2.in our school football team,piay football,Friday afternoon
3.exercise every morning,good life style,in China

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If I said I had a friend,I would be lying.Tom,on the other hand,is just a figment of my imagination out of my desperation for a sense of belonging and friendship.My imaginary friend,Tom,who is always there when I'm feeling lonely,is tall and strong with bleach blonde hair like a playboy.The cool guy (unlike me,by the way,because I'm a social outcast),has lines of brown so artfully interwoven in his hair that it must have been dyed professionally.Like many cool guys in my school,he is an outstanding football (maybe American football,I haven't decided) player,and he plays with my other imaginary frieds every Friday afternoon.Tom exercises a lot and leads a healthy lifestyle,but I just play video games and surf the web all day.Tom lives in China and will remain my best friend until I die.
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Hello,I'm going to introduce you to my best friend,Tom.Tom was born in New York city.He is 16,considerably tall for his age and very strong.He wins many arm-wrestling matches.He has curly brown hair,and a few streaks of blonde.He is very atheletic.He is in our school's football team and plays football with me every Friday afternoon.We are usually on the same team and we win nearly every match.Like many other athletic people,he exercises every morning,by lifting weights or running around the field.He leads a very good life style with healthy diets,and he is currently living in China.