.VI.短文改错（共10 小题；每小题1分，共10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你改你同桌写的以下作文

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VI.短文改错（共10 小题；每小题1分，共10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词的地方加一个漏词符号（ ^ ）,并在其下面写出改加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（ / ）划掉.
修改: 在错的词下面划横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I

saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.

Friend改为friends ； it 改为one ； that改为which ；the money前加for ； he should改为I should ；the去掉；if改为when ；after改为later ；gives改为gave ；much去掉

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