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哪位英语高手能帮我看看我的邮件有没有什么语病,

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哪位英语高手能帮我看看我的邮件有没有什么语病,
Your colleague Christina told me that,you will be taking over my case.
I have just received my graduation certificate.And I‘m going to Raffles to study Bachelor of Design(Graphic Design).
I will send all my highest educational certificates to you.
I have a question,I want enter school as soon as possible,please introduction me about intake.
大概意思是写你的同事把我的资料转交给了你,我刚拿到大学毕业证书,我将去莱佛士学院读平面设计学士课程,我将把我的毕业证书等发给你.
我想尽快入学,请你给我介绍一下入学的细节与入学的时间安排.
按照你的中文意思,可以大概这样写
Your Colleague Christina told me that she has given you all my information. I have just received my graduation certificate and I will be doing my Bachelor of Design(Graphic Design) at Raffles. I will send all my highest educational certificates to you. I would like to enrol as soon as I can, would you please give me some detail information about enrolment and its schedule?