作业帮请高手帮忙看下这个英文句子语法!
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请高手帮忙看下这个英文句子语法!
我这个句子有语法问题吗?如果有,请帮我在尽量少的删改下去掉这个句子的错误,尽量少的删改!
It is a pity that I have to give up what I have dreaming for a long time but without idea when it was come ture
当我长久以来所盼望的事情真的到来的时候我却没有了主意,不得不很遗憾地选择了放弃
我这个句子有语法问题吗?如果有,请帮我在尽量少的删改下去掉这个句子的错误,尽量少的删改!
It is a pity that I have to give up what I have dreaming for a long time but without idea when it was come ture
当我长久以来所盼望的事情真的到来的时候我却没有了主意,不得不很遗憾地选择了放弃
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it is a pity that i have to give up the things what i am looking forward ,because i lose my mind when it is really coming .
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it is a pity that i have to give up the things what i am looking forward ,because i lose my mind when it is really coming .