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能不能修改一下这段话的语法错误

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能不能修改一下这段话的语法错误
there are five floors in people's lives.most people stand on the first floor and wait to meet the person down from the fifth floor,if you want meet the high level person,why don't you push yourself to the fifth floor,at that time,you need not wait because they are around you and you are one of them.
there are five floors in people's life.most people stand on the first floor and wait to meet the person which falls from the fifth floor,if you wantto meet the higher level person,why don't you push yourself to the fifth floor,at that time,you need not wait because they are around you and you are one of them.
我就想表达这个意思 能不能写的更好些··
the higher level person的应该改一下,the person on the higher level,这样长点的定语放在后面比较好