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急求!高三英语改错!30分钟内要!Today ,Jack and I went to the countryside b

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急求!高三英语改错!30分钟内要!Today ,Jack and I went to the countryside by the bus for the Strawberry -picking Festival .It starts at 8:00 nin the morning .After the organizer introduced the rules of the festival ,we led into the strawberry garden by some girls .Whine walking along the road ,we saw beautiful flowers and heard the birds sang .The air was much clean than that in the city when yea live .During the festival ,we enjoyed sweet strawberry or watched some exciting performances.At about 5:00 p.m.,we had to say goodbye for the garden .Jack and I enjoyed us and hoped to visit there again .How an unforgivable experience !
咦 怎么还问这个?
第一行 去掉by
第二行 starts改成started 8:00后面是in 你可能打错了
第三行 we led into改成 we were led into,另外 Whine是不是你打错了,应该是While
第四行 The air那句话 改成 The air was much cleaner than that in the city where we lived.
第五行 or改成and
第六行 for改成to,us改成ourselves
第七行 How 改成What