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On May 29th,we had an English class.The teachers were Piewrre and another teacher.
In class,Mr.Piewrre described him and we asked him some questions what we wanted to knew.When he thought his or her question was great,he will gave him or her chocolate.But that made the class very noisy,so I didn't think that's so great.
Next,Mr.Piewrre showed some pictures to us about Chinese culture,polity and economy.He teached us an English song .He sang it for us.The song was great.And we saw a documentory about insect.It was kind of funny ,so I loved it.
In a word,I liked this class.Beacuse I think it was interesting.
On May 29th,we had an English class.The teachers were Piewrre and another teacher.
In class,Mr.Piewrre described him and we asked him some questions what we wanted to knew.When he thought his or her question was great,he will gave him or her chocolate.But that made the class very noisy,so I didn't think that's so great.
Next,Mr.Piewrre showed some pictures to us about Chinese culture,polity and economy.He teached us an English song .He sang it for us.The song was great.And we saw a documentory about insect.It was kind of funny ,so I loved it.
In a word,I liked this class.Beacuse I think it was interesting.
Mr.Piewrre described him
described--->introduced himself (to us)
what we wanted to knew--->
about what we wanted to know
When he thought his or her question was great,he will gave him or her chocolate.But that made the class very noisy,so I didn't think that's so great.---->
When he thought it's a good question,he gave a chocolate to the student.And it made the class noisily,so I didn't think it's a good idea.
Next--->Then
Chinese--->China's
He sang it for us.
for--->with
The song was great
great--->pleasant
It was kind of funny ,so I loved it.
so--->and
In a word,I liked this class.Beacuse I think it was interesting.---->
I think it was an interesting class ,and I like it.
described--->introduced himself (to us)
what we wanted to knew--->
about what we wanted to know
When he thought his or her question was great,he will gave him or her chocolate.But that made the class very noisy,so I didn't think that's so great.---->
When he thought it's a good question,he gave a chocolate to the student.And it made the class noisily,so I didn't think it's a good idea.
Next--->Then
Chinese--->China's
He sang it for us.
for--->with
The song was great
great--->pleasant
It was kind of funny ,so I loved it.
so--->and
In a word,I liked this class.Beacuse I think it was interesting.---->
I think it was an interesting class ,and I like it.