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英文介绍...请帮我检查有无语法错误
Hello everybody,my name is XXX.Today,I am honored to know you.In this week we will be learning together,living together.
I'm a bright boy.And I have many hobbies.Like swimming,computer,and singing.But I singing did not sound.My friends said that my voice like duck call.
I take part in the activity cause is that I want to change myself.I want to be an independent man
So,I hope we have memorable days
Thanks
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But I singing did not sound 这里不要这么说吧I am not very good at singing
I take part in the activity cause is that I want to change myself
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I take part in this activity cause because I want to change myself
这样改似乎更好